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Westminster John Knox Press What Not to Say: Avoiding the Common Mistakes That Can Sink Your Sermon

In , John C. Holbert and Alyce M. McKenzie provide helpful and practical advice for avoiding the common mistakes that many preachers make in their sermons. Useful for preachers, students, and teachers alike, What Not to Say addresses how to use language about God, how to use stories in preaching, and what not to say (and what to say) in the beginning, middle, and end of sermons. A companion video with preaching illustrations is available online at
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The Preacher's "Trash Bin"

Date:June 24, 2012
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Some great preaching advice I once heard: Never say from the pulpit that a certain idea came you to while you were in the shower. Because who wants to think about their pastor in the shower?
Or as John C. Holbert and Alyce M. McKenzie put it, "Don't tell stories that involve listeners picturing you naked. ...So you received an insight into the cleansing power of God's love in the shower on the mission trip as the cleansing and healing water cascaded over your body. Find another setting to tell about your epiphany."
I set out to read What Not to Say: Avoiding the Common Mistakes That Can Sink Your Sermon, thinking that the book would be full of practical ideas like not sharing shower epiphanies as having taken place in the shower. Yet Holbert and McKenzie also write with theological depth and care as they coach preachers on what not to say and do in the pulpit.
Their chapters cover what not to say (and what to say): about God, about the Bible, at the sermon's beginning, about the congregation, in the middle of the sermon, about yourself, in stories, and at the end of the sermon.
The goal of the book is "to give very direct advice out of the store of [the authors'] combined sixty years of preaching and over forty years of teaching others how to preach." They write, "It's important in preaching to be as clear about what we are not saying as we are about what we are saying." Here is where the theological depth of the authors comes to the fore, right in the first chapter: "First, affirming the sovereignty of God is not the same as insisting that everything that happens in my life and the world is directly the result of God's actions." The authors have a high view of God's sovereignty, yet caution preachers against saying or implying, "Everything happens for a reason... and that reason is God." Especially in a funeral sermon, for example, they say it's theologically misguided for the preacher to say that God just "needed" the deceased's voice to join the heavenly choir, or wanted "another flower for his heavenly bouquet." God is sovereign, yes, preachers should affirm, but did he really cause a drunk driver to kill your daughter? No, the authors would say; free choice gone awry (i.e., stupidity) caused that. But preachers have to be careful that their words don't somehow affirm that God's sovereignty means He somehow took away that life. He may have allowed it; he didn't ordain it.
Though the reader may not always find herself or himself in lock-step with the authors' theology (I think the Bible is more of an "answer book" than they seem to indicate, and I respectfuly disagree with their interpretation of Romans 1, that Paul didn't really understand the nuances of homosexuality), the reader will certainly appreciate their theological, Biblical, and homiletical care that grounds the eminently practical advice they give. The authors' love of the Gospel, of the Church, and of preaching is on full display in these pages... and it inspired me as I read.
They get very practical, too. For example, on bad preaching habits (verbal filler, overused non-verbal gestures, etc.), they say: "Anything you do in the pulpit again and again will become over time the source of boredom and finally ridicule. When the youth sit in the balcony and count the number of times you say or do a certain thing, it is time to take stock of your preaching patterns."
It would be easy for me to go on about the helpful things I read in this book. I highly recommend it to all who preach or teach, in the Church or elsewhere.
(I am grateful to have received a digital galley of What Not to Say for review through Net Galley.)
As the authors put it, "Preachers and teachers of preaching like to talk about the preacher's toolbox. That is a positive metaphor. It signifies a repertoire of useful, effective sermonic strategies. There is also a preacher's trash bin, a receptacle where we ought to put all the ineffective sermon strategies we don't ever want to use again."
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